Friday, 24 May 2019

my narrative

Hundreds of years ago in the deep blue ocean, lived a shark named Brutus he lived by himself he had green eyes and was still a young shark he lost his family a couple years ago when he was out hunting when he got sidetracked and he got caught in a rip. Ever since then he has constantly been looking for his family but has had no luck, he had a big brother named iti he's a old shark whos still living with his family he misses his little brother Brutus they have also been looking for him but sadly had no luck.


But Brutus realised someone had to know where his parents lived so he swam and swam until he came upon a octopus that looked familiar his name was tentiticles but Brutus wasn't sure if he knew the octopus he asked the octopus “do know who my family is my brothers names iti” the octopus replies “ no i do not know your family but i do know iti” really Brutus says “yes he's a old friend of mine” well do you know where he is “ no i do not i haven't talked to him in a long time” Brutus sighs ok then bye.


Brutus keeps swimming until he sees a shark before Brutus even gets to say anything the shark says Brutus is that you yes yes thats my name how do you know i'm a old cousin of yours waru you probably don't remember me but i was there when u were born your family has been looking for you for a very long time last time i saw them they said that they were going to live somewhere else i haven't seen them since that day. Brutus asks did iti go with them no said waru iti stayed behind but he's a old shark now do you know where he's living asked Brutus no i sadly do not i haven't seen him in a very long time sorry Brutus.


But we can try where he used to live said waru yes yes let's do that agreed Brutus so Brutus and waru swim to where iti used to live. They arrived at the location no one was there until out of nowhere a stingray gives them a fright are u looking for someone the stingray says yes we're looking for a shark by the name iti oh yes the stingray replies he's a old shark now he's just around the corner yes thanks replies Brutus. Brutus is so excited he hasn't seen his brother in a very long time and then before Brutus gets to finish his sentence a big old shark scares them iti is that you says Brutus yes now who are you i'm Brutus your little brother. Iti gets so happy BRUTUS! I haven't seen you in a long time where have u been ive been looking for you says Brutus and now i have finally found you. Without that big stingray we wouldn't have found you oh and of course the help of waru thanks guys says Brutus.


THE END.









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